Are the Magitech Chronicles by Chris Fox a Continuation of the Void Wraith Saga
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Imagine, you're reading a really good book (ie: this one). It's fascinating. It's exciting. It's thought provoking.
Getting on toward the end of the book, there's a powerful, emotional scene where a semi-major character is mortally wounded.
You can think of a couple ways the death could be averted, but recognize that's probably not going to happen.
The dying character offers their final, poignant words of wisdom and utters a final req
Can I just have a little rant about one of my biggest pet peeves?Imagine, you're reading a really good book (ie: this one). It's fascinating. It's exciting. It's thought provoking.
Getting on toward the end of the book, there's a powerful, emotional scene where a semi-major character is mortally wounded.
You can think of a couple ways the death could be averted, but recognize that's probably not going to happen.
The dying character offers their final, poignant words of wisdom and utters a final request
At this point, you're literally on the end of your seat, you feel tears forming in your eyes.
Then the next paragraph is some variation of "she breathed in one last breath, and died." or "he closed his eyes, and died."
Um, excuse me, what?
I'm currently seeing through the eyes of another character, "she died" is NOT what that character sees. That is not what she feels. That is not what she hears. Show me how it affects her, dammit!
That one line just competely killed every bit of emotional power that scene had!
Okay, that gigantic problem aside, this was a good book. Honestly, it was even better than Tech Mage. It had all the excitement, all the adventure, all the crazy encounters with living gods and powerful dragons and exponential increases to existing magical powers.
And beyond all that, the characters are getting deeper and more interesting. We learn some really cool background about our protagonist, Aaron.
And the author even improved the dialogue over the last one, so this one doesn't sound nearly as stilted, forced, and contrived.
All the way around, this was a great book, until that powerful scene was murdered.
That one scene is really the only thing that kept this book from a 5-star rating.
Obviously, I'm continuing this series. I can't wait to dive into the next one and see more cool adventures unfold.
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Now in book two, the court-martial ends with Voria being stripped from Major to Captain and her crew and ship disbanded. Now comes another augury and Voria must travel to the Umbral Depths, a dangerous unknown place.
So even though these are some spoilers, these all come in the first part of the book and are pretty much expected and easy to predict from the reader. Void Wyrm is pretty much like the 1st book. good writing, decent story and Fox does a good job keeping you into the story. I had to laugh at one part because it was like they were visiting the Wizard of Oz, to get and learn their powers and strengths.
Even tho I rounded this up to 3 stars it is really entertaining and worth the read if you like science fiction and magic. The only reason I didn't review it earlier is that I didn't feel like writing in my blog when I finished Void Wyrm on March 23rd, and here it is March 27th. I just couldn't put the book down that I started that night after Void Wyrm.
Void Wyrm by Chris Fox
Book two in The Magitech Chronicles series
First I want to talk about the main villain. Nebiat. She is too cunning, escaping from the claws of death whenever she loses.
I am kind of okay with that and at the same time I am annoyed by it.
But I think she should show some resolve.
She has been defeated by Voria twice in two books.
It looked like she is very cunning and intelligent, knew when she should stay and when she should leave if things go wrong.
Something else is required to make me feel dreadful of her. S Much better than first book.
First I want to talk about the main villain. Nebiat. She is too cunning, escaping from the claws of death whenever she loses.
I am kind of okay with that and at the same time I am annoyed by it.
But I think she should show some resolve.
She has been defeated by Voria twice in two books.
It looked like she is very cunning and intelligent, knew when she should stay and when she should leave if things go wrong.
Something else is required to make me feel dreadful of her. Something that makes me accept her escape. Or let her be captured by Voria and team and let her try to escape from that in the next books.
I think she has a great potential to be a villain and/or an ally if they capture her. We will have to see.
Other than that, Nara, Aaron and Voria were awesome. I liked and cared for them. I even liked Pikus.
But my absolute favorite one was Crewes. Such a simpleminded badass. His sections are too good, especially during his meeting with Neith and final battle where he lost his leg. He kind of reminded me great and simple minded characters from anime and manga. I wish we have a separate book or series focusing entirely on him.
Ree and Eros were mentors that Aaron and Nara needed and I would like to see how they progress forward. ...more
Honestly the only grip I have with the book is the Main bad Wyrm binding people. She does is like a one trick pony that everybody knows about, yet for some odd reason they have never instituted some standard
Like the first book it is pretty good. Not the best, but a decent read with a good amount of action and story progression. I bought the whole bundle on Audible for 1 credit and I really enjoy the recap at the beginning of each book which would be super helpful if I had to wait between books.Honestly the only grip I have with the book is the Main bad Wyrm binding people. She does is like a one trick pony that everybody knows about, yet for some odd reason they have never instituted some standard checks of people in important positions to see if they are bound our not. Like Erika who was apparently bound for years which caused the whole mess. If she easily binds people in the following books I will be angry with how stupid the people are in power!
At the end of the book I know that The strongest true mage Eros, Narra's Master (sorry if spelling is off as I listened to audible) still has a 3rd layer binding on him which wasn't removed as well the Major isn't the strongest mage ever, which is going to cause problems in the future predictably...which all could be avoided if some super strong mage actually checked people regularly.
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The first half was merely finding the mission and trying to put the team back together. By separating Aran, Nara and Voria we got snippets of story rather than a full narrative. This meant there wasn't the payoff when "rivals" re-appeared later in the book. I didn't care about Ree's relationship with Aran, because it was so paper thin (we saw 4 interactions between them).
We drop Kez and Board completely, for reasons, and they head off on a new mission
This was a bit of a drop from the first book.The first half was merely finding the mission and trying to put the team back together. By separating Aran, Nara and Voria we got snippets of story rather than a full narrative. This meant there wasn't the payoff when "rivals" re-appeared later in the book. I didn't care about Ree's relationship with Aran, because it was so paper thin (we saw 4 interactions between them).
We drop Kez and Board completely, for reasons, and they head off on a new mission. A mission that leads to them getting more superpowers from a living god that tells them she has been pulling the strings, differently from the spell that had been pulling the strings from the last book.
The final act was good, and I like that this was mainly based on Shiya, rather than Turnis like the first book. We are definitely building the world (though it still feels like a D&D game).
This was more of a 2.5 than a 3, but I will listen to the next ones.
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The world which was forced upon us with little explanation in the first book is more fleshed out and accepted by now. Characters who were previously able to do amazing things must now train and improve once we realize they are no longer the metaphorical big fish in the little pond. Characters are all further fleshed out and improved and you really begin to feel a connection to mo
While still suffering a lot of the issues of the first book in the series, this one was an improvement over the first.The world which was forced upon us with little explanation in the first book is more fleshed out and accepted by now. Characters who were previously able to do amazing things must now train and improve once we realize they are no longer the metaphorical big fish in the little pond. Characters are all further fleshed out and improved and you really begin to feel a connection to most of them.
My main problem with the series was the ending where seem to magically fix everything. A bit too Deus Ex Machina for my tastes. Also the epilogue and it's "big reveal" left me a little bored thinking "So? This won't change anything."
All in all, the series is improving for me and I will most likely continue it in the future.
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And the story gets better and better, we see a lot of character growth, the mystery of both Aran and Nara, Voria and Crewes(my favorite hahahahah that scene with the Goddess Nieth)!!!!!
So here we go with Book THREE!!!!
The adventure continues with its intriguing blend of magic and technology.
The followers of Krox strike at the heart of Voria's home, and while the team is able to mitigate the damage, Nebiat manages to kill the Tender and leave several seeds of treacery and destruction before quitting the field of battle.
Looking forward to book three.
The adventure continues with its intriguing blend of magic and technology.
The followers of Krox strike at the heart of Voria's home, and while the team is able to mitigate the damage, Nebiat manages to kill the Tender and leave several seeds of treacery and destruction before quitting the field of battle.
Looking forward to book three.
This continuation of the series is as good of not better than the first! The world building is exemplary and you can almost see and feel the action. You become so engrossed in the story, time just slips away until the book is done. This author sure leaves you wanting more, so I'm going to go get me some more. Lol
As exciting as the first novel!This continuation of the series is as good of not better than the first! The world building is exemplary and you can almost see and feel the action. You become so engrossed in the story, time just slips away until the book is done. This author sure leaves you wanting more, so I'm going to go get me some more. Lol
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I've read some other series that drop off after book 1. Fortunately, this series only builds. More character revelations, deeper relationships, and more powers are unlocked. It's like a popcorn movie, and I'm totally enjoying it.
Just as fun as book 1I've read some other series that drop off after book 1. Fortunately, this series only builds. More character revelations, deeper relationships, and more powers are unlocked. It's like a popcorn movie, and I'm totally enjoying it.
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Very very very good read. Evan though not a fan of D&D you have gotten me interested in the magic world! A+++
easy to read and fast enough to hold your attention. worth the time to read. looking forward to 3rd book
Enjoyable book, good pace, has a good mix of comedy and action
will definitely get the third one once it's out
Good fun readEnjoyable book, good pace, has a good mix of comedy and action
will definitely get the third one once it's out
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Enjoyed the world, the people, the battles, the adversaries. Looking forward to starting book 3. Just as soon as I finish this quickee review.
Didn't like it as much as the first book because the action was sporadic they the whole book but had a Good climax
Fairly GoodDidn't like it as much as the first book because the action was sporadic they the whole book but had a Good climax
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Combining both magic and technology, Chris wields a top notch and action packed story. Great characters and story plot. Looking forward to more of Chris's work.
A bit of a slow start, but the action soon picks up. A few new characters are introduced but mostly it is the same crew.
Continuing straight from book 1 Tech Mage, this sees Voria and her team being split up to take on new roles and learn new skills.A bit of a slow start, but the action soon picks up. A few new characters are introduced but mostly it is the same crew.
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I've been writing since I was six years old and started inflicting my work on others at age 18. By age 24 people stopped running away when I approached them with a new story and shortly thereafter I published my first one in the Rifter.
Wait you'r
By day I am an iPhone developer architecting the app used to scope Stephen Colbert's ear. By night I am Batman. Ok maybe not. One can dream though, right?I've been writing since I was six years old and started inflicting my work on others at age 18. By age 24 people stopped running away when I approached them with a new story and shortly thereafter I published my first one in the Rifter.
Wait you're still reading?
Ok, the facts I'm supposed to list in a bio. As of this writing I'm 38 years old and live just north of the Golden Gate Bridge in the beautiful town of Mill Valley. If you're unsure how to find it just follow the smell of self-entitlement. Once you see the teens driving Teslas you'll know you're in the right place.
I live in a tiny studio that I can cross in (literally) five steps and don't own an oven. But you know what? It's worth it. I love developing iPhone apps and if you want to work in San Francisco you accept that rent for a tiny place costs more than most people's mortgage.
If you and about 2 million other people start buying my books I promise to move out of Marin to a house in the redwoods up in Guerneville. No pressure. Wait that's a lie. Pressure.
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